Hurt

[Silentee]

"Fightpup!" Icefeather hissed sharply. "Please don't ruin my helper." Icefeather said kindly even though she was angry.

[Moonlit]

Fightpaw looked slightly mutinous, but she lowered her tail and dislodged herself from the mass of pups. "Sorry Icefeather. I wasn't trying to hurt Diamondpup." She mumbled, feeling a mix of shame and fury (The voice was screaming with rage but didn't quite make her attack Icefeather)

[Rainy]

Diamondpup blinked embarassed, she didnt like being treated diffenretly, like she couldnt defend herself, but maybe the truth was she couldnt! Gasp!
she watched the fight, worried for Clearpup's sake but he was holding his own amazingly, and she sat down beside icefeather
"Come on Clearpup!" she thought she saw something strange in Fightpaw's eyes...

[Silentee]

"It's ok."

[iceclaw]

Clearpup took the moment of Fightpaws distraction and knocked her off her paws with a sudden burst of energy as he heard Diamondpup cheer him on. He was suprised by his own ability to fight and was excited becuase he knew that he might be a pretty goof fighter some day, maybe not like fightpaw but similar.

[Moonlit]

Fightpaw, caught unaware, rolled over and jumped up again , landing squarely on Clearpup's back. Her eyes glistened a gold tinged red as the voice directed her.

[iceclaw]

Clearpup scenced a change and tried to get away.

(do you want to like have the voice take full control and like really hurt Clearpup then she realizes what she did?)

[Moonlit]

(Good idea, but Fightpaw will suggest they go exploring alone first. Diamondpup and Clearpup follow her, and she accidentally gets to carried away when Clearpup makes her mad and murders him, or wounds him seriously. She comes back to reality and runs away to be by herself. how is that?)

[Rosestar]

wow

[Rainy]

(you cnat kill him! lol hmm what will diamondpup's reaction be? she is horrified of course, and scared ,and realizes something is controlling Fightpaw. then she demonstrates she has some healing skills and patches up Clearpup a bit.)

[iceclaw]

(yeah that would be good....but we have to wait to see what fighty says)

[Rainy]

(BUT of course! hey iceyclaw go see that post in wanted boards for scarpaw's mate, icefeather and i have a plan and we need yo uto see it! and hopefully like it too!)

[iceclaw]

(ok!)

[Moonlit]

(Fine, how about Diamondpup tries to help Fightpaw, but she ends up killing her, or thinking she did. Then Diamondpup comes back, exposes Fightpaw, but she is too late. (This is after Songheart is made leader in the way future) and Fightpaw is about to kill Songstar. Some other wolf attacks Fightpaw and somehow Fightpaw goes into a coma where she meets the voice for the first time and defeats him, almost. She wakes up and is forced to explain everything to the pack and says that she will leave. She especially apologies to Ember, by now they are mates, but Ember tells her that he still loves her no matter what and the clan agrees to let her stay. Then the voice comes back, with more voices! She is really confused, and wolves mysteriously start disappearing again, but this time Fightpaw doesn't know she is doing it (Sorta like memory loss but the voices are doing it) she doesn't find out until it is too late.)

How is that?! Isn't it awesome?

[Rainy]

lol awesome but confusing... wow and a long time away! it seems...