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[Rosestar]

hey guys. im rosestar, rainy made me leader. soooo, should i rp on this thread or leave it be?

[Rainy]

what ever it doesnt matter to me! lol if you can think of something to say go right ahead!

[Moonlit]

uh huh. And you should make some very impatient pups apprentices soon. Before they try anything.

[Rainy]

yeah before they get much worse! Diamondpup will limp for life...

[Silentee]

Icefeather said "Grayhowl has marigold and cobwebs the same as you. g2g and talk to Rosestar ok?" Icefeather went over to her leader."Rosestar can I talk to you in your den?" Icefeather asked.

[Rainy]

lol
Diamondpup bounced around in circles for no reason

[Silentee]

Icefeather looked at the pup "Hey do you want to stay at the med. den longer?" she called out to her.

[Rainy]

"It doenst matter to me, i like hanging out with you Icefeather" Diamondpup wagged her tail

[Moonlit]

Fightpaw listened both to the pups and the voices in her head. Wait and then strike. it commanded. Be the best apprentice you can be, and when your a warrior you will do everything you can to become deputy. And then leader. It hissed, snakelike. It seemed to grip her in cold claws, making her bend to it's will. Stop struggling. Another voice spat, and her body instantly went rigid. She hate the voices and their control over her. "Hello" A voice whispered in her ear, and she jumped. It was another wolf. "Hello." She blurt out, looking into his eyes. Her own eyes narrowed as she saw he most amazing color that seemed to flicker with his emotions. His eyes widened as he looked at her own eyes and then she shook her head as the voices demanded her attention again. "I'm Ember pelt." His voice sounded like music, why was that? The name suited him. Because his fur was the color of embers and his eyes seemed to burn with his motions. A nice burning, not like a fire, but a soft flickering. Her thoughts seemed to float through her head, not really making sense as almost everything else fade away, even the voices.

[Rainy]

Diamondpup giggled "Fightpaw's acting funny!"

[Moonlit]

Fightpaw snapped out of it an cuffed Diamondpaw over the head.

(Do you mind if i double post, one with Fightpaw and then with Ember pelt? SOme websites don't allow this, others do)

[Moonlit]

This is Emberpelt's poem for Fightpaw. it comes later, but I want some critique first!

Even when we're not together,
my love for you will last forever.
And no matter what you do,
I just can't lovin' you.
And even when I know your gone,
Ill love you through the death and dawn.
And when I die a lonely death
Ill have searched for you until last breath
And after my life has finally died,
Ill rest knowing you are at my side.

[Rainy]

that poem is beautiful! gasp! and no problem that fine with me, ido it sometimes lol
Diamondpup shot a look at Clearpup and giggled again

[Moonlit]

Thanks, it took a lot of time to get it to rhyme and flow. And normally I suck at poems.

Fightpaw

Fightpaw glared at Diamondpup and Clearpup. Then she smiled at Emberpelt. "I'm Fightpaw." She couldn't help admiring how big and strong he was. Everything started to fade away again, the voices screeching at her were only a minor irritation now. When he smiled, it seemed as if her whole world lit up with sunlight.

[iceclaw]

Clearpup giggled and looked at fightpaw. He walked passed and purposely knocked into her.