The begining of my first book

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Ok, in my writing class the teacher said we could write a chapter book, like cynder, i think, so im writing one, but i need some help

the story is about a kid in a new school, and everything seems normal, but danger lurks when nobody else is around

Characters

Leads:
Owen Falcon (ends the action in the roof scene)
Danielle Falcon(saves Owen and Juliet in the hallway scene)
Mike Anderson (thinks he is tough and shows it in the libraby scene)
Chris Smith (nice and kind, but has to change himself in the lunch room scene)
Jordan Blackmar (has gotten bored with life so far, and finally gets some action in the gym scene)
Julie Beratou (Girl with the snarly attitude. She is not exactly popular but has a lot of friends. will be Owen's girlfriend, fights back in the band room scene)

Teachers:
Mrs. Brown(math teacher)
Mr. Melchor(history teacher)
Mr. Smith (Gym Teacher, Chris's father)
Mrs. Cohen (music/band teacher)
Mr. Kada (IRLA teacher)

Killers:
Giovanni Domovi (head guy, will be arrested at the end) (called Gio [G-O])(male)
Kano cooper(male)(second in charge grabs Cinder when he falls off the roof to his death)
Yukio cooper(male) (sent off the roof by Chris and Mike
Azami Cooper(Female) (sent off the roof by Julie, Danielle, and Jordan)
Birds:
Melanor (lives)
Cinder (dies when a killer grabs her as he falls off the roof)
Moon's Gaze (lives)
Moonlit (crushed by a table a table that the killers flip over)
Artemis (dies in a falling elevator)
Emerald(lives but gets trapped in a locker)
Rain (crushed by a shelf in the Band room scene)
Mist (lives) (kills Storm)
Hawk (killed by a killer)
Bright (killed by Glare)
Retro (lives)
Silent (lives)
Breezy (trapped in a cage with Tainter and is thought to be dead until the end)
Tainter (trapped in a cage with Breezy and is thought to be dead until the end)
Phoenix (killer lays out poison food for birds and Phoenix dies because of it)
Dawn (killer lays out poison food for birds and Dawn dies because of it)
Leaf (killed by Fade because she kills Echo)
Thunder (dies in the Sky, Star, Blood, Thunder, Shadow, River, and Wind battle)
Sky (dies in the Sky, Star, Blood, Thunder, Shadow, River, and Wind battle)
Star (lives)
Steel (leads police and Joe to Owen and his friends at the end of the story)(lives)
Willow (kills flame)(killed by Bone)
(evil birds)
Blood (lives) (flees with Fire, but gets caught by police that Jason called at the end)
Shadow (dies in the Sky, Star, Blood, Thunder, Shadow, River, and Wind battle)
River (dies in the Sky, Star, Blood, Thunder, Shadow, River, and Wind battle)
Wind (dies in the Sky, Star, Blood, Thunder, Shadow, River, and Wind battle)
Void (dies when a killer throw a knife at Melanor but it hits Void)
Rosemary (dies in a falling elevator)
Quatum (lives, but is put to death because couldn’t move, and was in nonstop pain)
Starry (killed by Star)
Echo (killed by Leaf)
Fade (kills leaf) (lives) (but get trapped in a cage)
Quil (drowns when Mike closes him into a fish tank)
Ice (tries to follow Fire but gets killed by Silent)
Fire (flees the scene at the end) (lives)
Claw (trapped in a cage with Tiger and they fight, but Tiger kills him)
Tiger (trapped in a cage from Claw, but they started fighting and Tiger kills Claw)(lives)
Eyes (the spy of the evil birds, but get caught and killed by Retro)
Glare(battle with Bright, kills her, but dies of blood loss)
Storm (killed by Mist)
Bone (lives, but after killing Willow, ets trapped in a locker, next to Emerald's locker)
Flame (killed by Willow)
popular people:
Jeff Masterson(popular guy) (saves by Chris, the guy he pushes around, in the bathroom scene)
(his followers)
Richard Cassen (the rich one)
Johnathan Peppers (the athletic one)
Cody Morton (the smart one)
Jake Newman (the stupid one)
Other kids:
Austin Cohen (younger brother)
Heather Cohen(older sister)
Jason Stone (trapped in a locker by a killer because he lost all his knives) (at the end, he finds a way out of the locker and calls 911, not knowing that the killers were dead)
Justin Koch(boyfriend of Gabby Laker)
Gabby Laker(girlfriend of Justin Koch)
Jane Laker (talking to Jordan when Danielle comes)
The weird ones:
Andrew Silverman (complete nerd and weird guy)
Mark Janks (Football player who is way too interested in Juliet for his own good- not really mean, very cute, generally a nice person, weird, but not as weird as Andrew, and can hide it) (gives up Julie when Owen saves him during the hallway scene)
ADHD gone mad:
Joey Bushwell (Owen meets before schools ends, he is creepy so Owen slowly walks away)
Angel White (Angel gasped, laughs and high fives Joey as Owen slowly walks away)

Others:
Joe (Owen and Danielle’s father, comes at the end of the scene)
Officer Matt
Officer Jimmy
Officer Drew
Officer Timmy

Janitor: (All get trapped in the basement)
Bob Johnson
Andy Stone
Mandy Sander


btw, most birds will be killed, so dont be suprised if after your name say that your bird dies

[Moony]

Alrighty:
Lead girl;
Jordan Blackmar

Jeff's Followers:
Richard Cassen
Johnathan Peppers
Cody Morton
Jake Newman

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thanks

i still some adults

[Moonlit]

Possible other Lead
Juliet Beratou (does you main character need a girlfriend? Lolz, jk. Girl with the snarly attitude. Not exactly popular but with a lot of friends. She could be another lead if you want)

Andrew's friend
Mark Janks (Football player who is way too interested in Juliet for his own good- not really mean, very cute, generally a nice person)

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thankies

[Artemis]

I see you put my name up there. Hehe, it is okay though. Need some more birds? Shadow, Void, Rosemary, Quatum, Starry, Echo, Fade, and Quil.

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yay, birds are needed, in the story, the will be a war of birds too, u see, the killer, brought all these birds to spy on his victims, speaking of which, i need a killer name, thats all i need, i can think of everything else on my own, thanks to whoever posted or will post about the killer

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lawl I start everything around here! xD

The killer? o.o ummm...he or she is human right? umm..Giovanni Domovi?

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yays, now i need 3 more killer names and im ready to start

[Emeraldblaze]

killer names would be Kano cooper(male), Yukio cooper(male) and Azami Cooper(Female)

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YES! thank u toby, and cynder! now i finally have killer names

i wouldnt mind more names

[Emeraldblaze]

Evil Bird: Bone, Flame

Teacher: Mr. Kada
Student: Angel White

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yays, and moonlit, im changing Juliet to just Julie, and i guess i put up two more good birds, but thats enough, i dont need anymore names.

[Moonlit]

kayz, thats fine with me